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I wrote something like this and I after each of you has expressed opinions.
I commitment refrain from you write more poems.
Thanks in hasten
"Flatliners
Painted dash. Do not momentary
Not protracted on a spotless canvas
brush with goose feathers
no yellow paint ultramarine
A moment uneven it appeared
albeit undulating, stringlike
river in the mean of the glacier
of high-flying birds seen wandering
Was to conjoin the two green dots
but more as two red spots
the ra somewhere else in the galaxy
heaven.
She was unexcelled in the ghastly like an arrow
without the mainsail without ailerons
without genesis, without purpose "
